Twisted Carnival TV Spot, Opinons?

[Smiley]

The link below is a commercial for Dr. Pain's Twisted Carnival (formerly Dr. Pain's Haunted Asylum), a haunted house that I've been apart of for several years now. For those of you who are in the haunt busniess yourselves, what do you think of it? Is it just right, or do you think we could have worked on a certain detail?



As a side note, I'm wearing the brownshirt/blackpants and the evil clown get-up.

[Barry]

I liked it. It has clowns so it must be good!

[elswarro]

Ok, I like it, but i think the editor could had built alot more suspense and shock. Anything with evil clowns will put chills down peoples spines.....so why not take it over the edge!

Hit me up next year and we'll make something crazy! You have a good thing going smiley!

- Jason

[Hisdamsel]

Dr. Pain's Twisted Carnival Commercial

Thanks for posting this Smiley - you beat me to the punch!

Great / Spooky minds think alike evidently!

You did forget to mention the alternate version though...

Hugs and Screams

Leisa
Dr. Pain's Twisted Carnival
http://www.drpainshauntedasylum.com
http://www.myspace.com/notesfromtheasylum

[Smiley]

Thanks for posting this Smiley - you beat me to the punch!

Great / Spooky minds think alike evidently!

You did forget to mention the alternate version though...

Hugs and Screams

Leisa
Dr. Pain's Twisted Carnival
http://www.drpainshauntedasylum.com
http://www.myspace.com/notesfromtheasylum

Alternative version? We did shoot some extra footage, but wasn't told it would be used in the alternative...Is that what it is?

[Smiley]

Ah! There's the alternative:

[Greg Chrise]

I like #2 better.

I like the timing and the fact that there isn't all kinds of heavy music and sound effects over the dialog. I like the second one as you can watch it over and over. The first one you might not want to see over and over, especially if you were normal you might even protest it even though nothing is actually shown.

Because the second one has lack of things the viewer is wondering what is happening. If it is all laid out it isn't as engaging. It depends on where it will be displayed. The first one might have a bigger impact to bringing the name to a cult following but the second one has a general appeal of fun for everyone.

[Mr Nightmarez]

I liked the second "alternate" better!

Good stuff